(A primer on writing a good tagline for your company brand)
Copyright © 2010 by Max Nomad for Bohemian Griot Publishing, LLC. All Rights Reserved.

When it comes to building your company’s brand name recognition, coming up with a good tagline is second only to adopting a good company logo.

And just like with the logo, many small businesses make the mistake of overlooking its importance. At first glance, a tagline just looks like a clever turn of phrase associated with a company logo. While this is true to an extent, there is far more at work beneath the surface. A tagline is a short sentence that, when used in conjunction with your logo, communicates a single but powerful brand message designed to resonate strongly with your target market. In short, a well-thought out tagline is designed to make potential customers decide to spend their money with you instead of your competition.

Whether abstract or literal, serious, humorous, or stoic, a good tagline should be used to do one or more of the following:

• Convey the major qualities of your brand
• Express your company vision or mission
• Emphasize your competitive advantages or what sets you apart from the competition
• Align your message with your target market
• Draw attention to a new direction your business is taking
• Make a promise to fulfill a deep-seated need or desire

The level of complexity behind these deceptively simple phrases is the reason why copywriters and advertising agencies are often hired to come up with them. Below are a few approaches that are commonly used while brainstorming taglines, followed by some memorable examples:

• Call to action (most memorable taglines use this method) – Nike’s “Just Do It.”
• Single words (always good in threes) as benefits — Pepto Bismal’s “Coats, Soothes, Relieves.”
• Connecting a product/service feature with an abstract need — Dasani’s “DASANI water. Can’t live without it.”
• Make a promise — General Electric’s “We bring good things to life.”
• Attention to the risk of not using product/service — Michelin Tires “Because So Much is Riding on your Tires.”
• Connect the tagline to logo’s imagery — Allstate Insurance “You’re in Good Hands.”

While there is more art than science involved with creating a tagline, the great ones always have several of the following attributes:

• Simple
• Original (uniquely yours)
• Memorable
• Unconventional
• Positive
• Personable
• Believable / Authentic
• Succinct
• Relevant
• Humorous
• Provocative
• Persuasive

Along with the tagline creative process, here a few other pointers to keep in mind:

• If you’re brainstorming your own tagline, keep a dictionary and thesaurus handy and note every idea, no matter how silly or irrelevant it may seem. It’s a mystery how the human mind makes associations between words and concepts. Some of the best ideas are born out of seemingly unrelated sources.

• If all else fails, include your Unique Selling Proposition in your tagline—what your company does best and why anyone should care. This is an especially good move if your business name doesn’t adequately say what you do.

• A company tagline is subject to change every so many years, especially if a company has changed or needs to showcase new services. A good example of this is UPS and how they changed from “What can brown do for you?” to “We [heart] logistics” with the goal of bringing attention to their new non-shipping related services.

• Regardless of what your business does, your tagline creates a first impression. People will remember a good tagline even before a company name. On that same note, having years of equity built up in an old tagline can work for or against your company. Ultimately it’s a promise of some sort, and if your company’s product or service doesn’t live up to that promise, your company image is in serious trouble. An example of this can be seen with the oil company BP. They adopted the tagline “Beyond Petroleum” back in the early 80s and successfully groomed it over the next three decades — until the catastrophe in the Gulf during the summer of 2010. BP’s reputation has, figuratively and almost literally, become mud in the aftermath of that ecological, financial and public relations disaster. People hear BP and think incompetence and massive oil spill. And in all three cases, no one is certain how long it will take to clean up the mess.

• Taglines with words or phrases that can become “dated” should be avoided. An example of this can be seen with the iconic Hip-Hop music label “Def Jam Recordings” (even though it’s a company brand and not a tagline). Founded in the early 80s, the company was originally named “Def Jam Records” with the intention of reaching young Hip-Hop fans by using New York City B-Boy slang that was in vogue at the time (Def was synonymous with “excellent”, and a Jam referred to a great song, party, or a concert). The only reason the company name is still relevant these days is because of the legendary status of the brand itself and its artists. The original impact associated with the meaning of the name is largely lost on the youth of today. While the word “Jam” is still valid slang in some circles, anyone that still uses “Def” to praise something (and isn’t being sarcastic) is probably either an overzealous fan of early 80s Hip-Hop or old enough to have grandchildren.

• If the impact or meaning of a tagline becomes dated it should be put to rest, regardless of how memorable it is. An example of this is AT&T’s “Reach out and touch someone” slogan. Originally introduced in 1979, anyone of school age or older can probably still sing the jingle. Today, thanks to the emergence of the Internet, cell phones, and other radical shifts in communication technology, talking to people on the other side of the planet is just as cheap and easy as talking to someone in your neighborhood. In a way that no one could have foreseen, technology took away that tagline’s impact, relegating it to an afterlife in nostalgic memories and Pop-Culture Trivia questions.

• Never use an exclamation point at the end of your tagline. Doing so cheapens your message and weakens your brand, regardless of how strong they are.

When it comes to your brand, don’t rush the process of coming up with a good tagline. A bad tagline is far worse than no tagline at all. If you’re unable to come up with a smart tagline, there are copywriters who specialize in just that. To begin your search, start by Googling for ‘tagline copywriters’. There is always time to update your brand with a good tagline at a later date.

In summary, the secret life of a great tagline is simple: when it is combined your company name and a well-designed logo—and all three work well together—they can become the best (and least expensive) form of advertising for your company.

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BGP’s Spyglass Spotlight is a series of commentaries dedicated to showcasing some of my design projects, the clients that commissioned them, and the way those projects took on creative lives of their own.

Umami Treats and Gourmet Delectables is a Detroit-based catering company, founded by Chef Robin Steele in 2004. As a company, Umami has come to be known for its specialty items — delicious chocolate chip cookies and pastries made from scratch. When Robin first introduced me to the concept and business plans, I had reservations about the name. In comparison to many small bakeries and cookie companies, Umami seemed either too exotic or too ethnic for the typical confection brand.

The word Umami is of Japanese in origin, loosely interpreted as ‘good taste’ or ‘deliciousness’ although it has many levels and many meanings. Oxford English Dictionary advisor Michael Quinion sums up Umami as “The fifth taste, sometimes associated with a feeling of perfect quality in a taste, or of some special emotional circumstance in which a taste is experienced. It is also said to involve all the senses, not just that of taste. There’s more than a suggestion of a spiritual or mystical quality about the word”. During a conversation, Robin emphasized that food that achieves the Umami taste looks great, smells great, tastes great, feels great and even sounds great when it’s being eaten. She believes that there’s a spirit of love and passion that transcends the cooking process and causes an almost orgasmic awakening of the senses for the person enjoying the food. After days of research I came to the conclusion that Umami is one of those words like “Zen” — conceptual, experiential, and steeped in cultural dimensions that would probably be considered enlightened by most Western schools of thought.

Because of the factors mentioned above (and Chef Steele’s personality), I decided that only an unusual design was going to work for Umami Treats. A logotype wasn’t enough. And although I personally love how the word Umami looks in its native Japanese Kanji, when the average American sees Asian writing on a package design they tend to assume it’s a product for Asians. With Detroit’s population being a little over 81% Black, 12% White, 5% Latino and 1% Asian, this brand definitely needed mass appeal. I also needed a somewhat surrealistic representation that would tie the brand name in with the product without being too symbolic. The final design had to have a hint of an old fashioned enclosure yet still look new enough to convey ‘progressively traditional yet fresh and organic’.

I went through quite a few ideas before coming up with a rough sketch I was ready to present. After importing the sketch into Adobe Illustrator, I reached a bit of an impasse about halfway through the manual tracing process. Because of the size of the cupcake in proximity to the cookies, it didn’t look like a cupcake. The top looked more like a baked mushroom cap and the cupcake liner resembled a stiff curtain at a cheap hotel. And where I called myself having fun with the idea of alternating orange and canary yellow beams radiating from a golden Sun, ethnic symbolism crept back into the picture… this time in the form of the “Rising Sun”, Imperial Japan’s World War II flag.

A few days later I spoke with Chef Steele and learned of the proposed Umami Treats coffee house in the works. Whether I was caught up with inspiration or frustration, I ended up completely scraping the cupcake and sunbeams. Instead, I added a coffee cup off in the distance of a warm, vague landscape. Luckily, this helped the chocolate chip cookies gain a greater presence in the final design.

Umami Treats — Brand in Action

Original Format: VOB MPEG-2 (stand-alone DVD)
Duration: 00:01:06s

This video was produced for Umami Treats as a cost-effect commercial demo to help her pitch the business plan. I figured the best approach was for potential investors to feel like they’ve seen the coffeehouse so I decided to create a mock commercial spot and burn it to a self-playing DVD. Since there wasn’t a budget for live actors, voiceovers or broadcast-quality production, I decided to produce this commercial spot using Ubuntu Studio (Linux). Although the address noted at the end was the coffeehouse’s proposed location, as of the date I completed this video it was still at the corner of an empty strip mall that was under construction. To “create” the coffeehouse I used a piece of stock footage of a Detroit street, interior shots from a couple of lounges in that area, and the smiling people and live music shots are from my photo archives — taken while hangin’ out with friends at Cafe Nema on U street in Washington, DC.

One morning in late February while brainstorming ideas for another client, I overheard some talking heads on CNN (my back was to the TV). The chatter was about how President and Mrs Obama used an Air Force helicopter to fly back to Chicago for their Valentine’s Day.

Something about that inspired me to follow up on a silly design idea — a slick, very functional, professionally printed full-color 5.5″x4.5″ flyer. The back was to remain blank so I could make a small menu template. Robin could then use a labelmaker program to print the menus and slap them on the back. Some menus would be for her cookies and other confections. Other menus would be for her catering services. The final result was to be an attention-grabbing leave behind with menu info that she could change without requiring complete flyer reprints. Simple, humorous and cost-effective. The next variation of the concept involves an over-sized postcard that can be filled out and dropped in the mail.

Over the years I’ve grown to appreciate keeping in touch with many of my old clients. A great fringe benefit that comes with what I do is that when a client is a genuinely good person, sooner or later we usually become friends — even if we’ve never met.

Chef Steele has been one of those long distance friends for a long time. One afternoon she forwarded a photo and a text message that had been sent to her phone. “Please tell Rhyn to stay Awake in class. Thank you and hope you can make it to open house at seven. Anthony S______ – Rhyn’s Fifth hour teacher.”

I couldn’t help but laugh. The young lady is Rhyn, Chef Steele’s daughter, caught in what is best described as a familiar story with a modern twist. Back in the day, if you got caught snoozing in class usually the worst that happened was a rude awakening and ruckus of laughter from your classmates. Now, here I was, one of many distant recipients chuckling at a digital Kodak Moment almost right after it happened. Inspired by the humor of the moment and the coffee-like smoothness of her complexion, I loaded the image into Photoshop, added the comic elements and emailed it back. Robin took my image and had it turned into a 4.25”x5.5” refrigerator magnet. It’s a great example of how promotional ideas can (and often do) happen as a result of happy accidents. Rhyn loves it, although we still don’t know why she fell asleep that day in the first place.

Although Umami Treats has faced a tough uphill road in these economic times, Chef Steele has proved to be very sharp when it comes to thinking (and investing) in promotional materials to help grow and strengthen her brand. With the way things look, this is just the beginning.

And, in case you’re wondering, the cookies are phenomenal.

Until next time, thanks for reading. Be well and be blessed…

– Max Nomad